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miércoles, 28 de enero de 2009

ALIA


Once upon a time there was a girl called Alia. Alia was very poor, she lived in the Sahara and when she was just a few years old, some thieves attacked her. Her parents came out to defend her, and the thieves killed them. Since then, her sister Hawala, took care of her, bringing food, caring, cleaning, teaching the things you can teach in a school because she could not pay for one. Hawala knew this situation could not continue so long. She decided to go find a place where somebody would like to host Alia. Some said that if but when they saw the state of Alia: dirty, tor clothes … They did not want to host it. Alia wasn’t five yet when Hawala decided to keep in a shelter. Hawala had to work hard to be at the heart of introduced in the shelter. Alia was in the shelter without seeing her sister and a few months later a family hosted throughout the summer, so fot two years until she turned twelve. Then she went to live with her sister again, but after that her sister died a few months by a disease that nobody knew how it was. From this moment Alia had to take charge of her self, she worked every day ten hours to be able to eat. Her house fall down, the house didn’t have tape-worm roof, in addition it was a full winter and it was frozen. Alia had to sleep in the soil and got frozen till a very rich family arrived there. They saw her and decided to adopt her. And Alia lived happily forever.


José Mª García López (1º ESO-A)

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