Once upon a time, there was girl that, when she was 12 years old, her mother, began to send her to buy the bread.
The first day she went to the market and she saw an old woman. But she didn’t look normal. She had a stressful look.
All the days that Ana went to the market and saw this old woman, at the turn happened very strange.
But only this pas when the old woman has to blink two times.
Ana went to her house and told everything to her parents, but they didn’t believe her.
The next day she went to buy bread, but with her friend Maria. The old woman wasn’t anywhere, everything was normal. Ana was ashamed, because it seemed that she had lied.
But it was true, Ana didn’t lie, because only she could see it.
It was a very strange thing, but if you want to know, then read.
The next day, Wednesday, his mother said:
-Ana, can you go to the market and do some shopping?
The first day she went to the market and she saw an old woman. But she didn’t look normal. She had a stressful look.
All the days that Ana went to the market and saw this old woman, at the turn happened very strange.
But only this pas when the old woman has to blink two times.
Ana went to her house and told everything to her parents, but they didn’t believe her.
The next day she went to buy bread, but with her friend Maria. The old woman wasn’t anywhere, everything was normal. Ana was ashamed, because it seemed that she had lied.
But it was true, Ana didn’t lie, because only she could see it.
It was a very strange thing, but if you want to know, then read.
The next day, Wednesday, his mother said:
-Ana, can you go to the market and do some shopping?
Ana didn’t want to go, because she was afraid, so she went to the market with her mother. In all aisle Ana saw the old woman, but she only could.
It was as if she was in a nightmare in which she couldn’t wake up, but it wasn’t this, she was in real life. One day she happened to see a seer, but the seer don’t saw nothing.
When it pass the week, Sunday, Ana went to the market, she was scared because the around at his house. But this day the old woman isn’t this. Over time sound the telephone…
-Ana is your friend Maria!!! Say the mother.
Ok mami and Ana take the telephone:
-Ana, my grand-mother it’s dead.
Now all had minting. Ana can see the future, that’s why she saw this old woman all the time, it’s because they knew it was going to pass something.
Andrea Alía de Lorenzo (2º ESO-A)
2 comentarios:
Buenos días Andrea, teniendo en cuenta la edad que tienes y la dificultad en expresarte en un idioma que no es el tuyo, me parece que tu cuento es precioso porque las historia te mantiene hasta el final en suspense, tus personajes tienen candor y frescura y, además has intentado utilizar utilizar expresiones ricas en su redacción. Como le he dichoa tus compañeros Álvaro y Gonzalo, espero más cuentos tuyos.
César Torres Gil
It is a beautiful story and that it has made my heart beat very fast. Although you are very young, you write with great feeling and you express very well in English. Congratulations!
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